This fan fiction is based on the film Battle: Los Angeles. It is about two different characters and their perspective of what is about to happen in the invasion of Los Angeles. This story is yet to be finished and it ended right before the invasion began. The author of this fan fiction had put a lot of detail into describing the characters and their actions as well as using good dialogue to show what the characters are saying to each other. The story is also very well written and the description of each scene and character makes it easy to understand and visualize.
This piece of fan fiction has been based on the film ‘The Mask’. The author has created a scene to what she thinks life would be like for the characters after the ending in the film. In this scene the character Tina is wondering what life would be like if Stanley would often wear the mask. It had been a while since he had used the mask and it had slowly been lost within his draws. While Stanley is in the shower Tina goes searching for the mask, once she finds it we looks at herself in a mirror and wonders what she would look like while wearing the mask. As she is trying on the mask she is interrupted by Stanley who has finished his shower, so she quickly puts the mask in her purse and leaves to work. The author of this fan fiction has put a lot of detail into her story and given a very strong description of what is happening. Although this is a very good story, it could probably have been extended slightly longer as it seems to end very fast.
This fan fiction is based after the film ‘Fast and the furious: Tokyo Drift’ and what it would have been like if the character Han were to survive the car accident and go into hiding from the yakuza in Barcelona. The author of this fan fiction has used a lot of detail in describing the characters and their actions. This is a very good story however the story can get a bit confusing with the flashbacks and the structure that has been used and it is quite a short story. Overall i did not really enjoy this fanfiction simply because of its structure. The storyline had good potential but was definatly let down by the structure in which it was presented. It would probally be better suited in a visual (film) text rather than writing.
This Fan fiction is a prequel to the transformers films and is about how Optimus Prime was discovered. In this story, Iron hide and his team of Autobots are searching through the rubble of a “Youth Sector” that had been destroyed by Decepticons. It is here where they find the only survivor of the attack who was a youngling (child) named Optimus. At first this story was a bit jumpy as the characters were being introduced but nearer to the end the focus was put onto a few main characters. The dialogue was also good as it replicated the characters accent in the films and emphasised key features that the characters portrayed in the film.
This fan fiction story was based on the film “The Grudge”. This story is about a character named Rose and her friends discovering who he neighbors really are. They were invited for a sleep over and they accepted not knowing that the neighbors were evil spirits trying to kill them. This story started out very good with good detail and dialogue, but nearer to the end of the story it seemed to become rushed and the author ended the story quite quick.


Hey was just wondering where do you import your pictures from? Were they from the wiki site Frank gave us? Or are they just uploaded from google?
ReplyDeleteThis is a test comment to see how the system works from my end and at this stage appears to be fine. On top of that, you have definitely brought back some funny memories with your choice of fanfiction to review and your breakdowns are both concise & informative.
ReplyDelete